Friday, May 22, 2009

[Poem] Uniquely Loving You - Parts I & II

Uniquely Loving You

Poems #169, 170

Written 22.5.09

I was reading "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus" and I was inspired to write this poem…After some time, I was inspired to write part 2 of it .. It's the first time for me to write a two-part poem.. I hope it's not that bad after all!

Part I

I want to love you so differently,

I want care for you so gently,

By showing approval; accepting you,

Telling you I’ll never blame you.

Even if it’s truly your mistake,

I won’t care, my trust won’t shake;

I know you can fix and mend all,

Big or small, you make things whole.

In my eyes, you’re the one and only,

With whom I’ll never feel lonely,

The one who fixes my incompleteness,

And frees me from anger and distress,

Because you know all about me,

You insightfully understand and see,

You’re wise and amazingly unique,

You’re the one I immensely seek!

That’s why I incomparably love you,

With a love that’s not just true;

A love that uses no clichés to speak,

A love so smart, knowledgeable and unique…

Part II

My idea of showing love is typical;

It’s always poetic; so lyrical,

Coz I don’t have a helpful clue,

About another novel thing to do!

You deserve a love so heavenly,

That I do my best to show openly,

By speaking those words and rhymes,

By being artistic or silly sometimes…

I want to show you what I have inside;

Affirm that I’ll be here by your side,

Love you in a hugely ineffable way,

Fill you with joy that won’t go away,

Encourage you to do your best,

Make you feel thoroughly blessed…

Hoping that after all this you’ll feel,

How I want “US” to be so ideal.

I hope you don’t mind that I write,

When I express love, it gives delight,

Because it’s my way to uniquely tell you,

That you’re the one my heart sticks to!

Beta Poem Copy--Still Under Revision
© Evronia Azer, 2009. All Rights Reserved.

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