I’m so dignified.. I’m so strong.. But I’m too weak to find my strength I can’t figure out what is wrong I’m lost.. too absorbed in life’s depth
I need You God to strengthen me To lift my soul with the faith You bring To make me whole and set me free So that thankfully my heart would sing
Change my being, O Lord … shelter me Direct me to follow Your chosen way And when it’s too dark for me to see Help me and push sadness and evil away
Enrich me with blessings, grant me Your love Fulfil Your will in my life.. with Your peace speak So that eventually, I reach Your heaven above For it’s the best and only place to seek
I’ve had the urge to write poetry for a couple of days, and this urge has accumulated :) and suddenly I sat down and without any idea about how this poem will shape, I wrote the title, and began writing, with tears urging to come down at some parts, especially when Annie’s song played in my headphones, followed by the second piece of "winter" from Vivaldi’s Four Seasons…
I spent around an hour and a half, and I have an exam the next day! But I don’t care.. I produced a piece I have enjoyed writing thoroughly… a piece that I know I will be proud of till I die! I believe it’s the longest I’ve written so far, and I like all the emotions and feelings in it… every single line in this poem has a huge meaning for me, and a deep feeling… I will write analysis about this poem soon, about how it is connected this way, just as soon as I’m done with listening to all the feedback which I am expecting! And I want huge feedback please, I wish that everyone would tell me what he/she thinks! I really really need to know what you all think, and how you understand and see the poem.. coz I may have a vision that wasn’t transferred in the right way to you…
And now, what I can say is: I hope you’ll like it!